Tranquility

Tranquility

A Poem by Jihyun Yoo



Sink under, let it flood in.
Arms put afloat. 
Like a weary old rose peeling its petals in exhaustion.
Be completely submerged, without a single bubble of air.
There is peace in not having to breathe.
Let sorrow fill every corner of emptiness. 
Greet the warmth of nothingness. 
Here, all is whole.
All is worthy.

© 2016 Jihyun Yoo


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This is realy worthy to read. What i feel is i go to my inner fears. And i dont feel fear anymore. Like some mantra or chant. i dont have nothig more to say. Cause i say already at my previouse rewievs. Just one more thing never stop write .

Posted 2 Years Ago


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I enjoyed reading the this piece.

So deep.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


It's amazing how you were able to express such feelings succinctly! Very nice

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sink under, let it flood in.

So much in that line alone.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome piece!
Enjoyed this read, I could relate to these words.
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jihyun Yoo

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
This was eerily melancholy. I loved this piece; it being vague enough in some areas to give me double-meaning, and raw enough in other areas to feel the full effect of the words.

Great work. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Jihyun Yoo

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, means a lot! :)
Asante

3 Years Ago

Hey, anytime. Keep up the stellar work. :)

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Added on September 4, 2016
Last Updated on September 4, 2016
Tags: poetry, story, dark, fantasy

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Jihyun Yoo
Jihyun Yoo

Waterloo, Ontario, Canada



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