The Beauty of an English Rose.

A tribute poem to English Roses.

The Beauty of an English Rose.


The truth beholds in mine eye.
A rose is all that's best in beauty.
She encompasses its true forms,
its many resplendent radiant faces,
-which the sunlight gently graces.

Reflected in dazzling radiance,
that shows no earthly boundary.
Reaching to very farthest stars
beyond the blue seas of seven,
-angelical dream of lovely heaven.

She smiles rainbows bright,
spreading charms of empathy.
Serenely expressing great joy.
Endearing love, so very unequivocal,
-she walks in beauty, an eloquent miracle.

Her glorious curves alluring you,
in seductions so very sensual form.
What fabulous sexual symmetry!
A red blooded man's, rampant adore,
-provoking a mythical lions mighty roar!

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

They filly she will strut, her coat will shine dapple,and the colts they will run and dance for her,up across the pasture down the fence,but watch her ,you run your hand down her hip,don't leave her head loose or she might wheel and kick.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

You would not be able to put reigns on this filly believe me, let alone fence her in......best to let her run wild and free if you wanted to see her true beauty.

[lee von cleef]

I thought she had the look of one who had never been halter broke,I have a pair of sisters the same way.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Hmmmm am i really that wild John :) I like the filly bit, me to a T x x x

[lee von cleef]

I'll lone you my riata,sixty feet long,Reateros, from the chihuahuan desert have put a charm on it ,special it is too, I gave up four young heifers just to have it made so , if your horse can put you close,a good throw should catch her,but don't tie off hard and fast,just dally now and then, see if you can turn her towards the ocean,the water is a safe place to learn to ride,(if you can swim)

[Bewitching Sensations]

lol.. he wrote that poem for me... i guess that makes me the filly :)

[lee von cleef]

Yes, A very provocative filly.I doubt if john needs help,but a western flair like pearl snaps might , help him catch your eye, or ear they have such a exposing sound when undone quickly, just takes your breath away.

[Bewitching Sensations]

:)

[Stanley Wilson]

aww mate beautiful and passionate poem you said all you wanted to say

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Maybe but am thinking there is another verse to this now.

[Ruth]

Not easy to verse adoration and desire in one piece but you have exceled here at doing so.
A most beautiful dedication love
xox

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Desire adoration.....and also admiration now.

[Ruth]

All three good :)

[Bewitching Sensations]

Not love though John.. Adoration yes... I accept that xxx

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

did i mention love.......no not me.....off that word t the moment lol!

[Bewitching Sensations]

Pleased to hear it.. Me too....

[Pencrafter]

Your poem focuses on the subject of most poetry, especially in songs, namely, that of womankind. The verse and line show good balance and rhythm, and your word choices are comprehensible and understandable to the average person. I like the way you blend her physical attributes with those of an endearing personality.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

A very lovely lady in every sense, glad I done this one.

[Leigh]

The subject has really taken you as it has altered your style a bit, in this one you write with passion and desire about Ruth and I can see why, she is truly beautiful, a real Bobby Dazzler. I like this piece very much and admire your good taste

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

She has a very endearing personality too as which is just as beautiful.

[Leigh]

Absolute result

[Adam Whitworth]

thanks for the poem, good one

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Cheers Adam.

[khalid]

very nice description as if you have taken a shoot of her with your pen..

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

What a great way to say that!

[Nicky Sarti]

Lovely job again sweets, like this.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thanks Nics

[Nicky Sarti]

Anytime, always meant x

[Becca Bishop]

Wow, I've really got to stop quoting lothlorienwriter. But he's absolutely right when he says that you've written yet another wonderful poem. WHEN WILL THE MADNESS END!!!! I've always wanted to say that. It wasn't as fun as I thought it would be though :( Ah, well.

This is such a sweet poem. "...all that's best in beauty...angelical dream of lovely heaven....she walks in beauty, an eloquent miracle..." all beautiful lines. I think you really captured the meaning of beauty in this one. Wow.... I'm awed once again (as usual) :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

BB you really are a joy.......I think one day I might write a poem about you!! What have you got to say about that??

[Becca Bishop]

I'd say: wow!!!! You finally wrote a bad piece of poetry!!!! Or a good piece of poetry with a horrible subject in mind...that seems more likely. Spare the world, please. They already have enough of me in these reviews. To read me in poetry???!! GAH!!!! WIPE THAT IDEA FROM YOUR BRAIN THIS VERY INSTANT!!!! WHEN WILL THE MADNESS END!!!! It was slightly more fun to say that time :D

[DrD]

Ah, the ode to a woman's beauty is the oldest yet most noble of themes. You have captured her quite well and lovely words became words of love. Great job.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thanks Doc your so right or should I say write :)