Who Am I?

Who Am I?

A Poem by Invisable_Girl

Everyday I look in the mirror

I see this stranger

This unknown girl with my face

As I stand there I wonder "Who Am I?"

I've faked for so long

I don't know myself anymore

I don't know the true Me

So, Who Am I?

Oh how I wish I knew

© 2012 Invisable_Girl


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That's pretty good. i like it. i think it represents a lot of yound adults these days. i kinda feel like you could add more to it. cause i was getting into and then it ended. :-(

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm baby Ricochet

Posted 11 Years Ago


Invisable_Girl

11 Years Ago

okay??
its rare to find someone so truthful in talking about himself the way you did...you have faced the painful fact .. its a start

Posted 11 Years Ago


We all get to this point sometimes in life
And you captured it wonderfully.

90/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Invisable_Girl

11 Years Ago

thanks for ur input:)
I felt this way myself many times. Life is a strange thing and we go through many phases in life. This is just one of them for you. Someday you'll look back and discover who you were as opposed to who you are and I'm sure you'll be much more content. Good writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Invisable_Girl

11 Years Ago

thank u:) nice to hear ur input
Relic's Bare Trees

11 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Self reflection. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Invisable_Girl

11 Years Ago

thank u for reading:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Huge part of the growing up... Finding yourself... Being yourself... We've most been there. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Invisable_Girl

11 Years Ago

thank you. yeah. i think i got it kinda figured out now but not completely haha

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Added on September 25, 2012
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Hey. I'm Joycelyn. I'm 16 years old and i hate life. message me if you want to know more. more..

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