Perfection replaced by potential...

Perfection replaced by potential...

A Poem by Juan

Life can seem to be extremly short when youre soul is intrigued by the differences everyone else has to offer you and monotonously wonderful when the long haul you've had has turned out habitually happy.

Restless mind wanders and schemes up scenarios, leave it all behind start fresh, a new world full of potential will make you happy...

Your instincts tell you different, the stability that has never failed you gives you peace of mind, nothing is wrong so why try to right it?

Dilemas stray in and out of your life but your choices will always be reminiscent in the path you chose. The world is brimming with cruel lust, the soul is weak with the desire to love blindly and your selections will never fail to hurt more than just yourself...

 I thought of your amazing smile and I smiled, I thought of your wonderful laugh and I felt good inside, I thought of the sultriness that you exude when you look at me in that special way and it made me lust for your voluptuous figure.

 My heart yearns for your happiness, my mind craves for more of your intellect and my body throbs with the desire to make love to you in such a passionate way that when you make love to someone else you'll know the difference and think of me...

               ...My sentiments are truth even if my actions speak lies...

                                     ...Always...

© 2010 Juan


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This piece was so unique I just had to ask you to be my friend...that is why I ask you to 'add' me. Ha! I would like for you to come by and read my work...that is another reason why I ask you to 'add' me. Since you ask for an explanation there are too!. ...I think, by what I have read so far, you are a good writer......cheers,lea

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this is wonderfully written, I like this full of passion...Kim

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


This piece was so unique I just had to ask you to be my friend...that is why I ask you to 'add' me. Ha! I would like for you to come by and read my work...that is another reason why I ask you to 'add' me. Since you ask for an explanation there are too!. ...I think, by what I have read so far, you are a good writer......cheers,lea

Hope to hear from you! :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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