Aloft

For Creative Poetry's Extra Challenge

Wisps of humid

essence circulate in

the atmosphere of being.

Translucent whims

waft among the arctic

rushes of desire.

And tremble at

the musical notes

of fulfillment.

Author's Note

7.23.11 Extra Challenge Words: Atmosphere. Circulate. Translucent. Waft. Arctic. Humid. Musical. Wisp.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Musical notes of fulfillment is a great line. It makes this piece loving and visual.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

'humid rushes of desire'.
Now that is a delicious line!
I enjoy these poems you create out of challenge words.
Great writing!

[Ben Taylor]

You used all 8 words in a 27 word poem--that is impressive! And it also has a profound feel to it..beautifully written, Judy. You rock at these lol.

[CadeeRine]

A lovely piece. Great work!

[FJ Davis]

(Personally, I'd rather my whims be opaque.)
"Aloft" is a creative challenge well-met. This piece was geared to soar.
There are few, Judy, who are your equal at such exercises.

[Muse]

Never knowing what I might read with you! You show a diversity lacked by some here, well done my friend.

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beautiful
and so surreal