Dare You Enter?

The burnished gleam

of a door knob

beckons the curious

closer.

Near enough 

to peer through 

the keyhole

Where a glimpse

of otherworlds

both fantastic

and frightful 

await.

Dare they turn

the knob and enter?

Or forever remain 

among the unknowing?

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Such a tempting poem .. shall you, shan't you .. a tease yet a dare! Judy, your words are like gems, they sort of gently nudge a reader into thinking thoughts that hadn't entered their heads seconds before. Here you've almost laid temptation on the way, or a gentle push into something unknown but wonderful.

[Pebbles]

oh judy ...my i cant wait to get to the other side of the door .... but hey curiosity killed the cat ..... im so god dam sensible at times it kills me so im going to take a chance and just burst my way in ......................... oh s**t !!

[Richielee]

brilliant Judy can be read as it is or as a metaphor for decisions in life,seiously excellent write

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

So glad I entered. My life is full these days.
Great poetry, My Dear!