I knew you were the one!!!

I knew you were the one!!!

A Poem by Julia
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it was random but it has a side meaning..i just haven't figured it out yet

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....i can see it......



...its written all over your face...



........i don't know why you tried to hide it from me...



.....i 
already knew it from the every beginning.......



....that your the one......



...who stole my cookie....

© 2010 Julia


Author's Note

Julia
i change the name cuz i agree the title does give the end away but is the new title better?

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LOL.......Just LOL nice write hun. made me smile

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it!
I love a bit in the ending
Nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i llike it, it made me smile even though it was about stealing someones heart. the poem flows well and i think hidden meanings are great. welld one

Posted 13 Years Ago


:)
Love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I get it, the cookies of love :)
nicely done...

Posted 13 Years Ago


haha i loved it its so funny this poem could cheer anybody up once again love this hilarious poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


ha ha, nice poem, I really llike it lol aweosme

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol i thought it was like a love thing! Lol i love this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha, I thought I had an idea where this was going, but then it turned on a dime with the last line. Smile worthy :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 26, 2010
Tags: PupPup, bell, Cookie, Lies

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Julia
Julia

Denton, TX



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all the writing are from the past before i gave up on writing...i was never good at being a writer and no matter how i thought i never could think of anything great.... Get .. more..

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