I knew you were the one!!!

I knew you were the one!!!

A Poem by Julia
"

it was random but it has a side meaning..i just haven't figured it out yet

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....i can see it......



...its written all over your face...



........i don't know why you tried to hide it from me...



.....i 
already knew it from the every beginning.......



....that your the one......



...who stole my cookie....

© 2010 Julia


Author's Note

Julia
i change the name cuz i agree the title does give the end away but is the new title better?

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oh and by the way, im favoriting this

Posted 13 Years Ago


hahaha that was sooo funny! i did not expect that xD

Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha!! very nice .. :))

Posted 13 Years Ago


LMAO! This one was so great! :-D I haven't read a happy/silly poem in a long time. Love it :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice, cute fun poem. My only criticism is the use of the numeral 1 instead of spelling out "one". Minor pet peeve of mine. We are writers so we use words. Leave the numbers to the mathematicians and accountants.

nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol. Sweet poem
Put a smile on my face.

Posted 13 Years Ago


hahahahaha!!!
comical though....:P

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol this is quite humorous at the end. I was so not expecting the last line to be what it was. This is very creative and a light hearted read that had me laughing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A interesting poem. Made me smile and want to know what is a cookie. Thank you for the fun poem this morning.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 26, 2010
Tags: PupPup, bell, Cookie, Lies

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Julia
Julia

Denton, TX



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