I knew you were the one!!!

I knew you were the one!!!

A Poem by Julia
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it was random but it has a side meaning..i just haven't figured it out yet

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....i can see it......



...its written all over your face...



........i don't know why you tried to hide it from me...



.....i 
already knew it from the every beginning.......



....that your the one......



...who stole my cookie....

© 2010 Julia


Author's Note

Julia
i change the name cuz i agree the title does give the end away but is the new title better?

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LOL short and sweet..

Posted 13 Years Ago


must have been the crumbs

Posted 13 Years Ago


yay :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Better. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is predictable because of the title so you might want to be a little bit more creative than that, but it's kind of funny. Nice work (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


fun!!!~ just when you think it's going someplace dark it goes in the direction of delightful baked goods~ very welll set up!~ =)~

Posted 13 Years Ago


take out the text speak, and this is a masterpiece!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 26, 2010
Tags: PupPup, bell, Cookie, Lies

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Julia
Julia

Denton, TX



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all the writing are from the past before i gave up on writing...i was never good at being a writer and no matter how i thought i never could think of anything great.... Get .. more..

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