Love Knows No Season

love poem

photograph compliments of myopera

 

 

Love knows no season

 

Yet… I look to you as I would a summer day

of azure dreams and lush green meadows

and a warm wind chasing the clouds away

 

It is this wind

singing through the trees,

                        a wind chime of melodies

dancing with the flowers on the hill

in velvet scents and rose petal whispers

             soothing my senses and stirring my soul

 

And should a raindrop fall on such a day of sweetness,

I’ll embrace this sudden storm and tiptoe through rainbows

knowing they’re not out of reach

                             not on a summer day

 

For you are the wind

               lifting me up

                      beautiful you

weaving my heart with sunbeam smiles

 

Love knows no season…

                            yet you are a summer day

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Love Knows No Season'
Msjewel,
Beautiful writing of seasons found in anther within experiences of impacting passion.
Loved this one especially':
"And should a raindrop fall on such a day of sweetness,
I'll embrace this sudden storm and tiptoe through rainbows
Knowing they're not out of reach'
not on a summer day"
Inspired for sure. Thank you for the beauty.
Blessings,
Kathy
"

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Kathy :) Julie

[Leeci]

wow. such powerful words. I like that you compared your love to something as beautiful as nature.

For you are the wind

lifting me up

beautiful you

weaving my heart with sunbeam smiles

Love this stanza, nicely put together :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for stopping by and leaving such a wonderful comment. I look foward to reading your poetry. :) Julie

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

A love poem indeed...

"yet you are a summer day" -- great closing, and a great line in terms of your concept.

I love the use of seasons in this piece, particularly summer, as it seems the most constant of seasons; where the light is the brightest and warmest. Love has her dark days, and to think of someone in terms of a "summer day" means that the light of love is shining eternally. Nicely written and metaphorically well put together.

[MsJewel]

Thanks again Sarah. I appreciate your lovely comments :) Julie

[wordman]

this is a really great write it touches all your emotions of love
and happiness loved it Ron

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron. Your wonderful comments mean so much to me :) Julie

[Keith]

Beautiful piece Julie, someone certainly someone inspires you like a summer day, maybe a daughter? Love the presentation, it looks like a beautiful hand written letter, a visual treat. Keith.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comments Keith! :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"you are the wind lifting me up"

love that line...and yes, love is like this...so aptly described by your nature references...

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob! I appreciate your lovely comment. :) Julie

[kublakhan27]

You've worked the seasonal metaphors to perfection here...I love the idea of tiptoeing through rainbows...this is a piece that dances and vibrates with life and love...wonderful work :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you. You are very kind. : Julie

[Rosaria_V]

" Love knows no season" I love it!! Spoken like a true romantic

[MsJewel]

Thank youmy sweet friend. :) Julie

[Jack...]

This was pure beauty Julie. So warm and delicate is the love you show us this day

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jack. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

"Love knows no season…

yet you are a summer day"
I agree with the logic of the amazing poem. True love bring hope and sunshine to us even in the days of winter. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment. :) Julie

[OTownPete]

Beautiful rendering as usual Ms. Julie. Thanks for sharing. Your frien din words, Pete

[MsJewel]

Thank you Pete! :) Julie