So it Rains

~ a scribble ~

~ photograph compliments of wordpress ~

 

 

~~~

Alone with the moonlight, is it a dream

that plays in soft repeat where I remain

waiting for rainbow days and yet it seems

the clouds have turned to gray and so it rains

 

And as the wind begins to rise and shake

the heavens weep and cry in wild refrain

Caught in this reverie is where the ache

breathes with inflections of a hurricane

 

 I shiver in the cold, though passions warm

in memories of you, etched and ingrained

with each tender tear that gently forms

to fill my heart, my eyes...left unexplained

 

The sun, it seems to rise, as golden rays

will weave my rainbow wishes once again

through clear blue skies that never seem to stay

when teardrops fall in dreams and so it rains

~~~

Reviews

[Stephen]

~~~ I think, you looking more beautiful when you “Scribbling” .. don`t ya? *Wink* ~~~

I like how you blend the beauty of some moon lights with the delicious taste of your love finding the paths ~~~ the unnamed roads~~~ walking over the ridges of some hearts all the time. It`s a spiritual write which conveying the message to be loved ~~~ around this wicked world ~~~ making it pure again as it was. Your glamour, the beauty, the love & your restrained beats shined up with the talent of yous through this marvelous write. All lines, all verses are beautifully expressed with/in your intoxicated muse and that`s all what I love about you & your stuffs. It`s always a great pleasure to loosen up my sexy foots over your pages. Great job, Julie. I adore this excellent poem!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[John Anderson]

i like the good strong writing and the imagery was fantastic...excellent poem!

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie

[papermush08]

"will weave my rainbow wishes once again"
I am embracing the taste of hope here.
Beautiful poem!
-N

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for your lovely comment. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie

[David Scott]

Crying in our dreams bring a rainy day indeed.
I felt the sadness of the memory here Julie.
The rain has a purpose, but I would rather have a clear day and sunny skies.

[MsJewel]

I prefer the sunshine as well David! Thanks so much for your kind words :) Julie

[yuki]

very very powerful nicely done :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

Beautifully written! I sense a transcendence where your poetry finds itself at home in the tenderness of your voice.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Nina C Palmer]

LOVE IT! All I can say. LOVE IT.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much :) Julie

[willweb]

Beauty falls from the skies and the eyes in this gorgeous poem today. Something extremely warm about this piece...maybe the sun is shining. I enjoyed this today.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[A. Amos]

The sun, it seems to rise, as golden rays
will weave my rainbow wishes once again
through clear blue skies that never seem to stay
when teardrops fall in dreams and so it rains


Above lines are amazing, enjoyed the read...

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome...

[Coyote Poetry]

"The sun, it seems to rise, as golden rays
will weave my rainbow wishes once again
through clear blue skies that never seem to stay
when teardrops fall in dreams and so it rains"
Even beautiful places can seem lonely and sad. I like the above lines. Feel of real place and emotion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is lovely and in the midst of your rain I find a soothing calm.Awesome Jules :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)