So it Rains

~ a scribble ~

~ photograph compliments of wordpress ~

 

 

~~~

Alone with the moonlight, is it a dream

that plays in soft repeat where I remain

waiting for rainbow days and yet it seems

the clouds have turned to gray and so it rains

 

And as the wind begins to rise and shake

the heavens weep and cry in wild refrain

Caught in this reverie is where the ache

breathes with inflections of a hurricane

 

 I shiver in the cold, though passions warm

in memories of you, etched and ingrained

with each tender tear that gently forms

to fill my heart, my eyes...left unexplained

 

The sun, it seems to rise, as golden rays

will weave my rainbow wishes once again

through clear blue skies that never seem to stay

when teardrops fall in dreams and so it rains

~~~

Reviews

[Stephen]

~~~ I think, you looking more beautiful when you “Scribbling” .. don`t ya? *Wink* ~~~

I like how you blend the beauty of some moon lights with the delicious taste of your love finding the paths ~~~ the unnamed roads~~~ walking over the ridges of some hearts all the time. It`s a spiritual write which conveying the message to be loved ~~~ around this wicked world ~~~ making it pure again as it was. Your glamour, the beauty, the love & your restrained beats shined up with the talent of yous through this marvelous write. All lines, all verses are beautifully expressed with/in your intoxicated muse and that`s all what I love about you & your stuffs. It`s always a great pleasure to loosen up my sexy foots over your pages. Great job, Julie. I adore this excellent poem!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Trace]

P.s. worm should be warm

[MsJewel]

worm, warm..spiders...lol...
it looked like warm to me..

[Trace]

Wow.... you've out done yourself on this little gem.
perfect ten count syllables.... Abab rhyme patterns
and beautiful poetics creating a captivating write.

Master poetess. ...
Trace

[MsJewel]

I must admit - I almost gave up counting this one out - Iambic pentameter and all that crap. It was going to be a sonnet and then it was too long...I'm glad you liked it...
Off to chase rainbows...Hugs, Julie (or worms)

[KWP]

It is just like reading a lullaby... x x x

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet friend :) Julie

[adreamer]

A beautiful love will always allow two hearts to soar high among the starts and the moon. Your poetry embrace all of us who loves beautifully written poetry Julie.

[MsJewel]

Beautiful thoughts Larry. Thank you my friend :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely write. Might I be so bold to ask if you meant "worm" and not warm? I was thinking warm goes with cold, but perhaps you were thinking in a different vein...

[MsJewel]

Nope - I was thinking warm...just a typo...thanks for noticing - I appreciate you!! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are the master of romantic writes but this proves you are also excellent of describing the journey of a heartache.

waiting for rainbow days and yet it seems
the clouds have turned to gray and so it rains

LOVE ITA!!

[MsJewel]

Master??? I don't think I can live up to that...Just little heartprints (scribbles). I'm thrilled you enjoy them. :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, AMAZING write. I love it. Nicely penned, my friend. :-)

Kaze~

[MsJewel]

thank you Kaze! :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your most welcome. :-)

[Ladysue]

Julie, this is written so poetically beautiful..my favorite parts are the last two verses..nicely done

[MsJewel]

Those are my favorites as well. Thanks for your wonderful comment :) Julie