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If..,

If..,

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a scribble ~

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art by Laurie Blank

 

If dreams came true, my precious one

lonely nights would never be

For I would let my hair flow

in an ocean of beauty

I’d catch you with each golden strand

and hold you close to me

We’d sail away upon sweet dreams

in colors of the sea

Reflections of an endless love

for all eternity

© 2014 MsJewel


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Your soft scribbles of impeccable romance are lovely treasures to read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate your kind words :) Julie
Oh how I dream this dream of dreams every single day! This was purely stunning. Captivating and the imagery was fantastic. That one love we dream of...how elusive it is but may we search on and hope that dreams really do come true.

Regards
Troy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your lovely comment Troy. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
oh wow if dreams came true I would be a very busy bee indeed ...

reflections of an endless love ... mmmmm x x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I think sometimes they do.. :) Julie
╰☆╮As always, this is full of elegance. Adding to my favorites, for sure.╰☆╮

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear one. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie
Gorgeous poetic grace... lyrically soft & tender. Such a beautiful expression.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and leaving such a wonderful comment. :) Julie
Sounds like some voyage......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

sail on! :) Julie
if dreams came true I would take you in my heart and never let you go
we`d sail away in the sunset of the love of no return if only my dreams came true

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Your sweet comments are poetry my friend :) Julie
Luverly Julie, it's like a sweet lullaby, soft and soothing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie
Very, very pretty..!!
Light and refreshing as a gentle sea breeze.
Kudos.

Scott

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Scott. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

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Added on July 3, 2014
Last Updated on July 3, 2014
Tags: love, romance, dreams, fantasy, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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