If..,

~ a scribble ~

art by Laurie Blank

 

If dreams came true, my precious one

lonely nights would never be

For I would let my hair flow

in an ocean of beauty

I’d catch you with each golden strand

and hold you close to me

We’d sail away upon sweet dreams

in colors of the sea

Reflections of an endless love

for all eternity

Reviews

[Ayushi]

"We’d sail away upon sweet dreams
in colors of the sea
Reflections of an endless love
for all eternity"
Lovely write.. :)

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Ayushi :) Julie

[onceloved]

Poets can take dreams to a beautiful level where we all love to be, you are an artist when it comes to written beautiful poetry...and where would we be without our dreams. Have a beautiful 4TH of July

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the kind words Remy. Have a wonderful 4th :) Julie

[willweb]

This reads like a whispered prayer. This was beautiful Julie. I really enjoyed this.

[MsJewel]

Thank you willweb! :) Julie

[Latifa]

beautiful and magical, I enjoyed it muchly

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[A. Amos]

A beautiful dream, you elegantly penned!

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

I'm falling in love with Ms.Jewel...

Your poems are beautiful and this is no exception.
I love a little daydream moment like this in the middle of my nutty day.

Thank you for carrying me away for just that tiny moment. : )

[Matching Socks]

Oh damn... did I just plagiarize your title? Yikes! Totally unintentional!

[MsJewel]

LOL...I'm sure it's been used a million times before and will be used a million times again! Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment on my poem...I'm off to read your If... :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

Thanks and you're welcome!

[Cory Barrett]

Such a wonderful dreaming peice

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful poem for love and dreams. I had to read again for the beauty of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you dear one :) Julie

[stars are far]

That is so wonderful.. i loved the romance employed here..
well done

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much :) Julie