Without A Trace

Without A Trace

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ missing my friend ~

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photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

     

 

The beautiful hours are gone

 

Images fade of amethyst nights and moonlit desires

and silver stars sparkling on an ocean of dreams,

 rising with the dawn, these tender tides

             like a promise dancing on a poetic breeze

                     where lush green vines, bloomed whispered words

                           Weaving our hearts in gentle rhyme

         

           vanishing... 

                 without a trace

 

as silence fills the empty space

you once painted with colors of love

 

How I long to hear just an echo of that breeze

but it is still

          it is cold

and you are left bleeding…

 

While I am nothing but a distant heartbeat,

a painful forgotten memory

 

In forgiveness,

      I hunger

        I ache

to find the words to tell you

 

a day without your voice is a lifetime without poetry

                                                                       without beauty…

 

The beautiful hours are gone

                                          

© 2014 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
I miss you Trace

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Tonight I am burning with the same feeling, of missing a close friend. I was thinking of writing something about it and I stumbled upon this beautiful 'without a trace'. I could feel it . Every word, every sentence. The poem now makes me feel you know how.
"a day without your voice is a lifetime without poetry
without beauty." Lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie



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Such sad feelings, so eloquently stated. I had just got to know Trace a few days before he left, and only had a chance to explore a little of his writing.
I too hope he returns.
I felt your pain so deeply in your writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

He is a wonderful poet and was a dear friend. I hope he returns as well. Thank you for your kind wor.. read more
This is something I can relate to and your pain mirrors my own. Your words are embedded on my heart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. I'm so sorry you know this feeling...I wouldn't wish it on anyone. Hugs,.. read more
Oh Julie...this made my heartache. Your sorrow at the absence of your dear friend feels like rain in my head. Your words tell of how much he means to you and what a hole he has left in your poetic life. I hope he returns soon. Very beautiful but so sad...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

WC just isn't the same without him. Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Oh Julie this is beautifully sad and this part just grips my heart…

a day without your voice is a lifetime without poetry

I could tell you two were close with all the collars you did… I don't know where he went but I feel your pain my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you sweet cowboy. :) Julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Was so my pleasure sweetie.
Beautifully written Julie .. the lose can be measured in tons and universes of black holes .. and it seems your word tears have filled many oceans. Would have to quote the whole poem to tell you my favorite line/lines. But guess what i really want to say is ((((((Julie ))))), it's so hard to miss someone.
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words my sweet friend :) Julie
so so sad.

the emotion springs from this like grass in spring.
but with an autumn feel.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :) Julie
Another masterpiece.
The last part
"A life without poetry
A life without beauty"
gave me goosebumps.

Again brilliant
I just love your work.

Thank you so much for sharing.
-Angad

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your generous comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
Angad Waraich

10 Years Ago

Well the pleasure is all mine.
You truly are a gifted writer.
Extremely powerful and sad...Your eloquence and heart felt love left me speechless.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very kind Steve. Thanks so much for your lovely words :) Julie
It seems this is the day it is going to be. Beautiful Julie but it seems sadness rains everywhere today.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I guess we can smile anyway and hope for brighter days ahead! Hugs, Julie
Aww, Julie. I'm moved to tears sweetheart.
So beautiful. xo (Hug)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ana. Hugs to you! Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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