Alighting

~ I'll always be a spring girl ~

 

                                      richard johnson ~ morning blossoms

 

 

Pastel scents and vanilla clouds

and the breeze singing in the sweetest voice…

 

“Come to my window, love

awaken the wildflowers

       for all is new”

 

I run to feel the sun in my hair

the blush on my cheeks

warming my heart

stirring my soul

like a dove...

 

          alighting

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Yes, you're all time 'spring girl'. I've figured that all out through your pages (earlier pages). Appreciate it. The poetry's written with the game of words. Liked how beautifully you compare clouds with "vanilla"; scents with "pastel" (its makes vivid imagery of pastel hues in mind); the shine of hair with "sun-rays"; blush of lips with "heart"... Really enjoyed reading this poetic art. Well written!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[wordman]

a beautiful woman,flowers,sunlight and the awakening soul
what more could a man desire,,great write julie

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Ron :) Julie

[Valentine]

With our third morning of the bright sun rising in the distance, I think all here are singing your fluent melody, beaconing spring to bring to birth God's garden of flowers. Valentine Sweet write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[Valentine]

You are more than welcome.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
beautiful beautiful.......
only spring could inspire such amazing poem!!!
i loved it Mam!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[ANTO]

This gave me a thrill. I imagined that there was a wonderful quid pro duo going on between the speaker and Nature in that - Nature was calling her to the window as if she was the muse of Spring and would encourage its blossoming - in return Spring was the writers muse. Sublime writing.
Well written Julie!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Saddam]

warming my heart
stirring my soul
like a dove...

Love this write, Enlighten my heart.

[MsJewel]

Happy Spring my sweet friend :) Julie

[Elisa]

I think my favorite line is the first one, especially with the image of the vanilla clouds. This makes me so excited for beautiful spring days, especially since it's been so cloudy and gray here. Thank you for bringing pastel scents and vanilla clouds to brighten my day.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for brightening my day with your lovely review :) Julie

[KWP]

yes I get that very feeling - each little nuance - every single when I walk and watch the sunrise - love that sweet moment of bliss kissed seemingly on for me

nice Julie XXX

[MsJewel]

Spring is right around the corner! Happy Spring! :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Spring fever in a good way! The spring time is such a beautiful season and
you managed to capture it's beauty with poem. You have such an elegant
touch to each and every one of your pieces. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment James :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Very welcome:) b-blessed!

[Trace]

Springtime is one of my favorite seasons, I love to feel the newness of it all.
The sun on my skin, the warm breezes, the longer days,

this poem encompasses so many of those feelings, and brings a smile to my face.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. I love it when you smile. Love your new picture by the way! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A powerfully uplifting little poem… I love the spiritual nature of this poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always a pleasure hon.