Flowers in the Rain

~ a little love scribble on a rainy afternoon ~

 

 

 

 

He brings me...

 

flowers in the rain

wild as they grow

my hair the silken storm

sweeping his pillow

his eyes the tender light

as two shadows blend

his hands the gentle guide

to the rainbows end

and when the thunder strikes

and petals softly fall

he gathers all my love

as moments seem to stall

in storms that rise again

and in our hearts remain

wild as they grow…

 

flowers in the rain

~~~

 

Reviews

[Brian]

"my hair the silken storm
sweeping his pillow
his eyes the tender light
as two shadows blend
his hands the gentle guide
to the rainbows end"

It doesn't get any better than this. Just so incredibly beautiful. I can picture every part of it. And I love everything I imagined. So expertly crafted! Fantastic, Julie. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is so romantic and at the same time deeply sensual and it flows like silk Julie. The image of flowing hair upon the pillow is deliciously spelt out.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment John :) Julie

[onceloved]

Once again your poetry is flawless in every detail so tender fill with loving words so beautifully penned too. The image you use is absolutely very beautiful too. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are more than welcome Julie. :) Larry

[Jamestown]

I just love this piece and picture,
Well penned, sweet sentiment and beautiful message,,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my rainy afternoon scribble. Thanks so much James :) Julie

[Jamestown]

U R welcome, love your work:)