From the Shore

~ a romantic fantasy ~

Art ~ Karol Bak

 

 

 

From the Shore

 

The moon reigned the night

and the stars were her diamond crown

 

shimmering

 

as slow waves

teased a gentle shore

and the wildflowers on the hill

gracefully swayed

 

The sand was soft under my toes

his breath was a whisper, warm on my cheek

we searched and found where tides had never roamed

where night had never dawned

 

He lifted me up and the crown became my own

 

….and the wildflowers gracefully swayed

~~~

 

Reviews

[Trace]

I don't think you have a bone in your body that isn't romantic.
Everything you write is simply mesmerizing and inspiring.

And you have such a unique way of painting a picture with your words
that makes it easy for the reader to see into your fantasies and imagination.

I like the wildflowers.

Huggs, Trace

[MsJewel]

((((((Trace))))) It's wonderful to see you here. I sure miss you. Thanks for the lovely comment. I hope all is well. Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

I posted a poem I wrote today.
We are having a blue moon tonight.

[Daydreamer]

Ms. Jewel you always shine like a diamond in your work. Thank you for sharing this gem!

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet - thank you :) Julie

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You always find those places where no words have touched, leaving me enamoured with your words, Julie...if ever there is a true romantic, then surely it is you, my friend...bravo!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

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My pleasure, Julie!

[Beccy]

This paints such a beautiful picture in the mind's eye.

A walk along the shore, the sand soft as the whispered breath of love, is an experience that should never remain simply a fantasy.

Really enjoyed this lovely poem. Beccy.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Beccy :) Julie

[R Smith]

Beautiful Julie, you never fail to amaze me with the range of your romance, it's beyond compare :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Richard :) Julie

[jeannemarie coulter]

lovely thought provoking sensual write...well done

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you write of such positive and respectful love....leave your poems with that faster beat of the heart.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Adam Adams]

"The moon reigned the night
and the stars were her diamond crown..." What a graceful starting!

Very soft, gentle & tranquil obsession of paradise your words're certainly pounded with. Lovely scenario you've created here! Everything that love has to be treasured with is passionately blew/rendered to 'tis poetic page. Excellent work as always!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[zaisham9393]

Nice, sweet, beautiful, romantic poem :)LOVED IT ...

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

just so very good .. i'm swaying in afterglow ... so happens we were in the Black Hills a few days ago .. the rains and sunshine have been perfect out there .. from our cabin one can see thousands of wildflowers swaying in just such a way ... they swarmed between the pines and birch .. and i was graced to watch the "blue moon" rise in all her splendor ... your poem put me right back there in the hot tub .. floating and dreaming ;)
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie