For All Time

~ a little romantic scribble ~

art ~ Henry Asencio ~ Beholding

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To feel your hands caught in my hair

as eyes lovingly meet

To catch your gaze then lose myself

in your tender heartbeat

To quiver at the light tingle

of breath against necks nape

To kiss sweet words from candy lips

until whispers escape…

 

In sighs of love, of want, of need

an unchained melody

Harmonious, like singing birds

floating above a sea

of tangled sheets and silky skin

so lovely when combined

As gracefully two become one

when gently intertwined

 

To find the warmth in your embrace

bodies held taut and tight

To softly melt in all that’s you

with only love in sight

To catch my breath and feel that stir

untamed and yet sublime

To ask how long I shall love you….

To answer…for all time

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Reviews

[Trace]

It's so wonderful to see a poem from your talented pen.
And it is even better when it is a beautiful love poem.

Nobody can describe those emotions like you do.

Very nice to be in love. Nicer when you can share it through poetry.

Huggs. Trace.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet beast. Miss you...Hugs, J

[MAC]

nobody scribbles romance with sincerity that you do. wonderfully written....

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words
:) Julie

[Adam Adams]

Captivating poetry. Love. Love. And just the honey suckle incenses of whole romance been reflecting off your words -- the texts you rune into the calligraphy of people's hearts. Brilliant, as always.

[Ruth]

Sigh...such soft beauty enveloped in a golden hue of the heart...breathtaking :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Poppy :) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

I can smell the butter of two souls melting into one beautiful story.

Regards,
Al

[MsJewel]

Thank you Al :) Julie

[adreamer]

I love how softly your words always flow together so beautifully in all of you're writing it come from someone who has a very beautiful poetic heart. Someone who loves poetry as deeply as you do. always a fan of you're writing :)Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry

[James]

That was amazing, beautifully written. I could feel the emotion.

Very nice.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my romantic scribble. Thanks for the lovely comment :) Julie

[Nigel Newman]

This is beautifully written with some wonderful phrasing. Like other readers, I was especially taken with 'untamed and yet sublime'. As I get older, the physical aspects of my loving relationships assume a different perspective, but that's just me. Intimacy is what you write of, and it's very very well done.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Nigel :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Lovely, sensual, and romantic. It is nice to read and review you again.

[MsJewel]

It's wonderful to see you. Thanks so much for stopping by with some kind words :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Been a while since I read one of your romantic poems... now I can sigh like I really mean it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sweet Cowboy. It's always lovely to see you :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhh true love ..let jaded eyes begone says Ms. Jewel ;) simplylovely ..thats all i can say ..lovely ..enjoyed reading ...these especially melt me:
"To kiss sweet words from candy lips
until whispers escape…"

E.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the kind words :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

i don't think you ever miss with your romantic poems ... they do bolster my faith ;)