Captured

Captured

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ a simple little love scribble ~

"

                       art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

                A prisoner of your love

           not wanting to break free

 

I’m bound to your heart

            and tethered completely

 

Mesmerized,

                                    hypnotized

I’m spellbound, it's true

Captivated,

                                     entwined

 

I’m

        tangled

                        up

                               in

                                    you

 

A prisoner of your love

         not wanting to break free

 

Caught within the beauty

                   of a love that’s

                                     captured me

© 2014 MsJewel


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this kind of being a prisoner is really delightful, because this is case of giving yourself up because you want to be incarcerated in someone else's heart.

beautiful metaphor here, Julie...
such soft texture to your words...you are a kind person...it shows through in your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Jacob, thank you. That is one of the nicest compliments. I try to be a kind person. :) Julie



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tangled up in you. I love that . a wonderful love poem this is.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I'm captivated by your poetry, so beautifully scripted!

Posted 6 Years Ago


beautiful, and your erotic pictures enhance your work perfectly. I would love more.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
dear Julie... to be captured is divine...
sipping love 's nectar from nature's wine.
You are gifted with love potion number nine.
truly ... Pat


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Your comments are sweet poetry dear pat! :) Julie
Can I sign up to be a prisoner again? Another nice little poem of happiness!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie
This is a lovely poem! :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Romantically Written With Your Captivated Heart!

Nice Imagery. In love, every person`s being caged right inside the fathoms of heart-beats tangled up in its mazes. Whether the love gives pain, happiness or makes one feeling shackled with compassion, love itself makes two loved souls feeling like prisoners - Spirits hypnotized by love. Enjoyed reading another romantic piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I’m tangled up in you

Quite excellence write as usual. Great read dear friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review :) Julie
This is such an extravagant, sweet, sensual glimpse of the love within you, whispering through you. The ideal moment of feeling captured, yet free in the wildest sense. xo

Posted 6 Years Ago


I do love being this prisoner...there is something about being wrapped up in a love like this that is just beautiful.
Again Julie, such a beautiful soft tone to this one that drew me in and had me feeling each and every word.

Troy

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Troy :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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