Captured

Captured

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ a simple little love scribble ~

"

                       art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

                A prisoner of your love

           not wanting to break free

 

I’m bound to your heart

            and tethered completely

 

Mesmerized,

                                    hypnotized

I’m spellbound, it's true

Captivated,

                                     entwined

 

I’m

        tangled

                        up

                               in

                                    you

 

A prisoner of your love

         not wanting to break free

 

Caught within the beauty

                   of a love that’s

                                     captured me

© 2014 MsJewel


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this kind of being a prisoner is really delightful, because this is case of giving yourself up because you want to be incarcerated in someone else's heart.

beautiful metaphor here, Julie...
such soft texture to your words...you are a kind person...it shows through in your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Jacob, thank you. That is one of the nicest compliments. I try to be a kind person. :) Julie



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Amazing flow to this poem...Another gem by you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Steve :) Julie
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call this a "love scribble" is like calling a symphony a nice band. you write amazing "scribbles", Julie. -- mark

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoy them Mark :) Julie
you write about love so beautifully enjoyed the read you have captured me with your lovely poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Jim :) Julie
So lovely expressed with softness of permanent attraction of lovers deeply coiled the images far fabulous than ever felt....

Posted 7 Years Ago


So lovely expressed with softness of permanent attraction of lovers deeply coiled the images far fabulous than ever felt....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Gorgeous lines. Golden tones when read aloud. And perfectly suited image and font color and face.

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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :)Julie
MomzillaNC

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
What makes this poem work is its presentation, which carries it from being simple to magical with a few well placed words, artwork and font.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) Julie
this is true beauty........
another one of my favorite.....

"

I’m

tangled

up

in

you



A prisoner of your love

not wanting to break free"

i just love these lines!!!

amazing poetry!!!
i loved it!!!!!
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Beautiful poem, not only in words but also to see, the way you wrote ' I'm tangled up in you ' is very stylisch. You make not only a beautiful poem, but it's alway artistic too; the image, the font you use, the colors, I like this style of yours. And all we not all prisoners of love, once you are catched you don't want to be free anymore, addicted for ever. :)
Rudi

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rudi. I enjoy finding art for my poetry almost as much as I enjoy writing it. :) Jul.. read more
Lovely poem!
You always win my heart with your alluring words. The way your words rhyme and your flow, both are outstanding.
From the font to the meaning, everything is perfect. The repetition makes it more better.
Elegant and nicely penned. I loved this :) and the picture is beautiful too :)


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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