Delusion of your Own Making

Delusion of your Own Making

A Poem by JulieNorell
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Nothing but a thing.

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Safe? Safe is just a word! It’s not even a reality! Safety is just something that every one of you stupid people make yourself believe in. No one is ever safe. Not in the arms of a man, a mother or anyone else. Safety is just a delusion that you create so that every single one of you can go on with your miserable lives and pretend like everything is ok. But how many times have bombs dropped out of the sky unexpectedly? How many times are does one woman get raped in every minute of every horrible day? How many children are begging for food on the streets? How many people are sleeping on the ground?

 

Safety is a delusion of your own mind.

 

Wake up!

 

© 2011 JulieNorell


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My oh My, I have found some true talent here;)
Really well written JulieNorell
if you write anything new, let me know? i love your work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is brutally honest, and i can really relate to it. i love this poem!! its brilliant

Posted 13 Years Ago


you're gettin' there, good morning!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm awake, I'm awake!

Where is our protection if not in the comforts of our own minds? It is human to find comforts in reality by deluding ourselves with our own thoughts of security...
Nice Write!

RLG,
Tommy


Posted 13 Years Ago


Fabulous!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A thought provoking message. As none of us are safe really. The 'are' isn't needed in this line: "How many times are does one woman get raped in every minute of every horrible day?" You could even had losing jobs, raising of taxes, etc to this message. A thought provoking poem. Even though it seems some people don't want to wake up.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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