O Wanderer!

O Wanderer!

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze



Wanderer, oh wanderer where have you been?
I've been to the fairyland to see their queen.
Is she just as classy as the people say?
She roams like a pixie and is on her way!

© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze


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Jyoti_Ablaze
Doodle!
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very nice poem and this poem gives me idea to me so thanks! keep writing !

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Akki.
Glad you liked it! :)
Very nice poem. In few words you said so much about how beautiful the fantasy can be.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you Salvatore.
Glad you liked it! :)
short. simple. & way systematically sophisticated poetry you've come up with!

looked more like a smooth fairy you were supposed to be scribbling sometime, may be, at night? or in the faze of fuzzed morn? or may be, at the gloomsy gloomy-ness of Melancholic "noon"? quite entertaining it is. rhythm's, of course, treasurable as usual. great job, Miss Ablaze.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you Adam. I doddled it during a boring morning lecture.
Adams

3 Years Ago

ah.. morning lecture? great. me too used to write such "doodles" when i attended some of my lectures.. read more
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Cute!

Just like the fairytale nursery rhymes of old!

Short and sweet and with a very lovely picture!

Good job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Thank you Doodley! Glad you visited. This is a piece I doodled in class! :)
nice one :) keep writing :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you.
Short, sweet and good rhyming

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you Shabeeh. It was fun penning this down.
Shabeeh Haider

4 Years Ago

....and fun reading it.
Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Ha! Thanks!
Short and sweet :) nice one

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Such a fun and short read, nice piece!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you Maria!
What a cute little rhyme!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Eliot! :D
I like this piece... short *_*; but i really like this piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Khatoon! Glad you liked it!

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