A few poems! [pardon me if they suxxorz]

A few poems! [pardon me if they suxxorz]

A Poem by *Kantola*
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Just a few poems that I had lying around somewhere 0_0

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Too many things happen in our teen years:

Drugs

Alcohol

Bad influences

Deaths

And even you thinking that everyone is against you

You can point fingers all you want

No matter what, teenagers will stay the same

Argumentative

Rebelious

Know-it-alls!

Give them space and time

Maybe a little maturity

Then they'll realize how foolish they've been

 

(Death is like a canyon reflecting others

One death can be one crater affecting us

and giving us pain

Or even one death could be many craters

The size of the hole is equivalent to how much you knew the person

Maybe even who is affected by the death can affect you in the same way)

 

A little slash here and there wont hurt!

Oh, no

Maybe a little black make-up will make me feel better!!

Nope, not that either!

Black clothes look good on me! They match my emotions.

Nope, waaaaaaaaaaaaay too desperate!

Maybe I should stop crying for all of the attention and wishing myself dead.

That might work

I should make a few friends...

Yup!

Buy some non-black clothes

What an improvement!

And I should face my fears already! My new friends could help me through it all!
YES!

 

 

A friend is there to help you though thick and thin

A friend can cry with you, laugh with you, and love with you

A friend will do what it takes to see you happy

A friend will tell you if you're doing something wrong, or acting out of character

A friend can go shopping with you

A friend will not judge you; only if you ask them to

A friend will share some of the same interests

A friend can create a whole new world with you

A friend would tell you to do those same things for them.

© 2008 *Kantola*


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awww i loved these! they were so cute and so very true! well done =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


no they dont suck at all!!!
i love the Friend one :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked the poem that had "A friend..." it was extremely touching and emotional. I like how you used repetition of the first phrase to really impact the poem. I liked the first one as well, because of how you use colors and font size to impact the way the poem looks and to an extent how it feels. Sorry to say that I couldn't really understand the middle one, maybe you could explain it sometime?

Posted 11 Years Ago



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