Broken

Broken

A Poem by Kawaiikitty96
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I'm not going to bother going into detail about this. It's obvious that I'm heartbroken. I know it's not really that creative, but I just wrote down what I was feeling, and that's what matters, right?

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Broken
I tried so hard
Not to fall
But you kept pushing
And I fell

Stupid heart
You should've known
This wasn't right
You should've never given in

Now I'm shattered
torn
battered
worn

And most of all--broken

© 2015 Kawaiikitty96


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Short and simple, writing is not about using the biggest words or the most creative thoughts its about expressing ones feelings within a genuine,honest manner and that's what you did right here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kawaiikitty96

9 Years Ago

Very true. Thanks!
So sad when one feels broken, I pray you will be ok! The write is simple but heart
felt. Great job expressing yourself, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kawaiikitty96

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much

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Added on February 24, 2015
Last Updated on February 24, 2015
Tags: broken, heartbroken, breakup, heart, sad, depressed, lonely

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Kawaiikitty96
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