The Land of Broken Promises

The Land of Broken Promises

A Poem by Kawaiikitty96
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A brief poem I wrote describing some thoughts I've had following a recent sad happening.

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The Land of Broken Promises


There's a land of broken promises
And you built it
With every lie you told
With every oath you broke
You laid the foundation
And constructed this wretched dystopia

© 2015 Kawaiikitty96


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Even though that this poem you wrote is short, it is very powerful. Nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kawaiikitty96

8 Years Ago

thanks! I appreciate your feedback
emipoemi

6 Years Ago

......I second this (took the words out of my mouth). Very well done indeed!

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Added on June 17, 2015
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Tags: broken promises, heartbreak, poem, poetry, free verse, broken heart

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