My Hope

My Hope

A Poem by Kay Salisu Titilola
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My Hope.

From my young age,
I've been dreaming,
Having visions,
Of the future.

With today's pain,
I've been grinning,
Knowing friction,
Assist mission.

Though the rough way,
Could be greasy,
But I won't stop,
Never give up.

I know one day,
I will be free,
When my dreams come,
To completion.

© 2019 Kay Salisu Titilola


Author's Note

Kay Salisu Titilola
Until I get there!

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The speaker seems to be one who has goals but has not yet been able to realize them. There seems to be some difficulty at present, but I sense a determination that won't quit.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

1 Week Ago

That's it, John.
Thank you very much.
This is a wonderful poem with a powerful message, but I believe you should be be and feel free anyway even before your dreams come to completion. Life is a beautiful spiritual journey despite the negative aspects of society. We are all here, as divine beings, for a wonderful purpose as decreed by Our Creator.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful words, Prince.
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Li
You never disappoint Kay!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words, Li.
You have used very tight verse here which conveys a sort of tension, anxiety, but you inject it with words that convey the hope you feel as you strive to reach your goals.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your wonderful review, John.
There are many ways to portray future hopes, and yours is up there with my own personal favourite from the archives of all human knowledge.... To infinity and beyond, toy story 😀

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Lorry.
Never give up, This is so good, very well presented as well

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Kescha.
Kesch

5 Months Ago

not a problem sir...
Never give up on your dreams and when the going gets tough, cling on to them with every last ounce of your energy. So much feeling in these lines Kay.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

5 Months Ago

Yeah. I will never give up.
Thank you for your encouragement, Chris.
Hope is a beautiful thing. The poem itself is simply put with good rhythm and a strong message. I like your attitude.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, R.J.
I really appreciate your kind review.
I understand what you're saying here, Kay. Your thoughts come across well. I too have always been a dreamer and yet from a contrarian point of view, a pragmatist.
My belief is dreams only die when the host body dies, and even then they can continue on through others.

A good write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

5 Months Ago

Yes, I agree with you.
Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Ted.
I love your positivity and determination!
Laura

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kay Salisu Titilola

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Laura.
Positive thoughts make the mind healthy.

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Added on September 24, 2019
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Tags: achievement., vision, fulfilment, dreams, action, experience, step, challenge, Life

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Kay Salisu Titilola
Kay Salisu Titilola

Ijebu ode, Ijebu ode, Nigeria



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