Aurora

Aurora

A Poem by KeeD

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Aurora will you wait this time
no more guilty pleasures
Loving you is my only crime
Your heart I wish to treasure

I'm feeling your vibe across the universe
Making contact with my mind
Distance has been our only curse
There's nowhere I won't seek and find

Wrapped under a blanket of stars
I need you like the desert needs the rain
Your voice cleansing all my scars
Till I no longer feel a longing pain

You give me a celestial fever
Pumping my blood and numbing my brain
Reality disappears into the ether 
The thought of your vision drives me insane

We've been riding shotgun on our dreams
Let's hold on tight to how we feel
I believe it when my heart screams
Because I know this love is real

Aurora you're my space
Surround me completely
Someday we'll meet face to face
And I'll kiss you deeply

© 2018 KeeD


Author's Note

KeeD


pic credit PrismSky https://prismsky.deviantart.com

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I love this and hung onto every word. Your play with words and the passion you show when you write is phenominal. You write like a romantic. Xo

Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

You're a Goddess
I've always liked this picture. Vaguely remember using it as a profile photo once.. Your rhymes are very eloquent, straightforward and conventional in their pattern, yet somehow discreet and tasteful. I find that very refreshing. Your writing is relatable, clever and you take me on a visual journey by every stanza, making me want to read more. The music enhances how your words already make me feel. I enjoyed the poem very much.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very passionate. The choice of words makes this poem very effective. I loved this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


ahh... this is so lovely... i love your choice of music to go along with it
what wonderful word choice -- this makes me feel wistful and full of hope

Posted 2 Years Ago


It’s very creative to use “Aurora” as a person’s name & then also using imagery that is reminiscent of the aurora borealis. I like the way your poem sounds primarily addressed to a far-off love that cannot be reached, yet it can also represent some natural phenomenon, such as “the aurora” . . . or any spiritual entity of one’s choosing, that flits around in the sky of one’s imagination. Good rhyme & rhythm, plus the way your poem starts out simply stated & then grows more passionate as each stanza goes along (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

I loved your review on this. It truly makes this poem have worth. Thank you!
amazing!, i always enjoy your creative word play...
and the fiery, lyrical fluid energy that hums in around in my head. deeply heartfelt,
engaging write. all great lines, but i have to say my favorite is the fourth stanza.

stunning poem ~ x

Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

Thanks BJ for the great review, I have a few lifelong friends on here, you are surely one of them!
ms. barrie

2 Years Ago

you’re always welcome, keegan, and me too x
I really enjoyed reading this one.
I guess we fall in love with souls before faces. I kindly feel this poem so deeply, I am talking to a guy who is living in a another country but he got my heart already I can't wait to see him to be with him face to face . Beautiful written .



Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

Long distance love is one of the most passionate and amazing experiences to encounter in a lifetime... read more
Celestial fever, eh? What wonderful phrases in this one! I'm not sure but this probably has something to do with aurora borealis (?)
Beautiful write, could sure be turned into a sweet little song.


Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

Haha yeah Zoe, you figured it out. I've got a thing for comparing beautiful anomalies or encounters .. read more
Zoya

2 Years Ago

Ahh, i see
Lyrics. Beautiful lyrics, you need someone to sing this. Gentle and whimsical. Someone similar to Kate Bush to do your words justice. Very well done, and hello pleased to meet you.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

I'm actually just getting a cup of coffee because i'm so excited to read your creativity that you've.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

Have come back a week later for a second read, I love this so much. Hello Keegan.
KeeD

2 Years Ago

Hi Chris, that's really sweet of you to do so. I just underwent surgery so forgive my absence on you.. read more
wow, just wow, your play and words and modern touch on each verse is refreshing. Its beautiful and whimsical. well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

I really like how its appreciated as whimsical that makes me happy, because after all isn't every lo.. read more

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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