The Best I Never Had

The title speaks for itself.

Beneath the sun I see

The holder of the key

To my heart

You are God's great work of art

Your smile was the glowing sunrise of my morning

The red ribbons of your lips always shining

A glowing candle that warms my everyday

Every step of the way

Your voice is the food for my soul

Fills the hunger of my life's hole

You are my heroin

You are my queen

Your eyes formed from  crystals of delight

You are everything that seems so right

You walk so nonchalantly

From my dreams to reality

You are the star of my night

Always beaming very bright

Like a compass for the right direction

Towards your perfect reflection

You are a rainbow in the sky

Kissing every storms goodbye

Lo and behold

A beauty that is good as gold

You are the best I never had

Fate and destiny forbad

I can never be with you

Even if I wanted to

You are the sun

My universe's only one

I am the moon

Always gone too soon

You are the missing piece to my life's puzzle

A life long struggle

Lost and can never be found

We are on a merry-go-round

Some things are never meant to be

Like you and me

There are many other fish in the sea

But you will always be my felicity

Reviews

[C. Rose]

Your voice shines through.

forbad?
Capitalize Felicity if it is a name.

Off rhymes: puzzle/struggle, heroin/queen.
Consider giving yourself as easier rhyme scheme like only rhyming the last two lines of each stanza so you don't have to force it.

A pleasant read :)

[paul sal.....]

Has she returned?.................................

[KeiseRaven]

unfortunately...

[LauraraMonique]

you have a very loud voice. I love this piece.

[William Gardner]

Thank you this is nice work. I agree with C. rose, forbad is there because you want to stay in your rhyme structure but you can't fit it right? Sometimes a poem needs to burst out- The truest feel of the poem is when you do it earlier- you are my heroin. I think there you want to break- There are no poetry police! how much more would it be if you let it out? Salamat po.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem.
"You are the missing piece to my life's puzzle
A life long struggle
Lost and can never be found
We are on a merry-go-round"
I like the flow of thoughts and the above lines stood out for me. When two people are complete. The best days of our life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote