NEED!

NEED!

A Poem by Kelsmiles
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For everyone that has ever felt the driving Need! to be with a loved one, and of course for my loving fiance, David, I love you Honey Baby!

"
NEED
My flesh weeps to
be filled with your
presence.
my mind silently
screams your name
my throat locks up,
I gasp!

 written by Kelle T.
June 13, 2008

© 2008 Kelsmiles


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This is powerful and written in essence.. i could feel my own throat locking up as i read
in way your words take hold of the reader and being a short work..is highly effective
the heart is impacted before one realizes the poem's finished.."need.. casting forth
ever desires.. sensusously passionate exuding..delvingly charged metaphysical romance
portrait longing.. kel-this is very beautifully surrendered- would capture any man's heart

my mind silently
screams your name
my throat locks up,
I gasp!


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Oh, this is wonderful... congratulations to you and yours! A very powerful expression, I tend to think he could feel it even if he were on the other side of the world. I wrote a poem titled Submerged... will send you a read request; for some reason that is coming to mind as I read your words. Excellent write, thanks for sharing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice Kel

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like your use of the caps and the exclamation point. they really get your point across.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A good way of expressing such extreme desire.

A.M.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, you said so much in so little... It makes me want to read it over and over... Great job!! So beautiful!!! it captivated me and flowed amazingly... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is powerful and written in essence.. i could feel my own throat locking up as i read
in way your words take hold of the reader and being a short work..is highly effective
the heart is impacted before one realizes the poem's finished.."need.. casting forth
ever desires.. sensusously passionate exuding..delvingly charged metaphysical romance
portrait longing.. kel-this is very beautifully surrendered- would capture any man's heart

my mind silently
screams your name
my throat locks up,
I gasp!


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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