Break these chains

Break these chains

A Poem by Kelso
"

just something that really represents who i am

"

everyone is alive, but not everyone lives

some people drift through life

working to please people

who just put you down, or expect to much

these people worry about the consequences

every moment of the day

people like this worry to much

about what other people think, or what they said

these people are not alone

people like this are people like me

we are to young to worry like this but we do

together lets break out of these chains

they are starained, just a bit more

and we can break free and be alive

 

© 2010 Kelso


Author's Note

Kelso
hay, please let me know what u think :D i would like come criticism please!!

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

can someone PLEASE review this poem?? i want to know where i can do better!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

511 Views
1 Review
Added on March 11, 2010
Last Updated on March 23, 2010
Tags: break, these, chains, good, me, life, this, love, and, brea

Author

Kelso
Kelso

About
im an 18 year old girl who is very interested in writing more..

Writing
your the one your the one

A Poem by Kelso


my life my life

A Poem by Kelso