Insecure

Insecure

A Poem by Kibbs Fortilus



Insecure

 

You only see me smile

You don’t know what I hide

Insecurities, past and present failures

Suppressed and kept inside

 

You will never get to know me

But you’ll assume to have the truth

What’s true is false, what’s false is true

In this era of our youth

 

Don’t judge me, but encourage me

And then I’ll show my heart

If you really want to see my thoughts

First you’ll have to start

 

We’ll sit down, talk eye to eye

And our relation will be better

But until you’ve decided this

Your comments will not matter


     --- K.S. Fort



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© 2017 Kibbs Fortilus


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hummmmmmm i like it maybe a little bit of detail be nice but over all it is a good write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kibbs Fortilus

7 Years Ago

I agree. I find that I focus on emotions so much and forget to be more descriptive.

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Kibbs Fortilus
Kibbs Fortilus

Berlin, Berlin, Germany



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