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met a girl

Say, you got those beautiful eyes

Burned my mind with brilliance

Say, you got those beautiful eyes

Burned mine beyond recognition

 

It was you,

That burned me

With sheer brilliance,

And it was you,

Who wounded me,

With sheer brilliance,

 

Say, you got that gorgeous smile

Left me beyond speechless

Say, you got that gorgeous smile

Left me feeling like a lustful beast

 

It was you

Who scarred me

With pure brilliance

And it was you,

Who afflicted these wounds

Burned by your brilliance

 

It was you,

Although Smarter

And more experienced

Who made the rights wrong

The wrongs seem right

Everything seems well

Due to your sheer brilliance

Reviews

[FireWoman]

I think I know her =)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

How delightfully sweet :) So you do have a sentimental side ;) I hope you showed her this poem !