The Return

I remember...

Within the primordial seas of dark matter

He casted his luminescence

Another creation was born 

But with this particular element

He patiently preserved a memory,

And bestowed his equity.

Anticipating the very moment

She would awaken and discover

The hidden truth of her existence...

Reviews

[james miles]

this is so mysterious with love...very creative...beautiful.

[rubie]

I like so much about this piece....

It has so many applications and is relatable to so many situations.

It can be a lovers' reunion, it can be biblical, or it could be a spiritual awakening of sorts.

Nicely done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sounds like Eve discovering she has been made as mate to Adam...and finding out that truth of her being created...

very cool write...

i like the preservation of memories...that is what we do as poets.