The Gatekeeper

What has been created can never be destroyed

A little soul searching

Seeking remnants of remains

Untouched by you

Walking solitary

Down the straight and narrow

Footsteps fill vacant hallways

Echoing into ether

Behind closed doors

Still I find

A piece of me

I cannot offer 

For it isn't even my own

To give.... 

Reviews

[Michael X]

The shadow of heartbreak. What cannot be given has already been given away. torn between two emotions. A beautiful disaster poetically defined.

[Butch Decatoria]

I like this very much. Oh life and wonder --yet how our dreams and the hereafter loudly in our hearts --roll like thunder... beautiful write.

[Sami Khalil]

An excellent message with openness and uplifting tendencies. Brilliant. ...:))))

[Nisreen]

I guess the soul has so many pieces
and we can't for sure say we own any single part

i enjoyed this write makes you think of how soul mates find one another ...... with no physical control ......

neat !!!