Tormented Words

I dont have dreams anymore. Only nightmares, and this is one of them.

 

Tormented Words

 

 

 

Tormented Words

 

 

Ringing in my head

 

 

Rattling my every thought

 

 

 

I can not picture the sound

 

 

Of these words coming out of your mouth

 

 

They get caught in my head and I struglle for breath

 

 

 

I try and try and try again to forget

 

 

These words that just won't leave me be

 

 

But they seem to enjoy my pain and misery

 

 

 

And then

 

 

The day I didn't want to imagine

But am cursed to never forget

 

 

 

 

 

You walked by

 

 

You walked straight by me calmly and swiftly

 

 

And went up to her

 

 

 

 I could only imagine

 

 

What you were about to say

 

 

And surely enough, you said it

 

 

 

"I love you"

 

 

 

Not to me but to her!

 

 

He took her in his arms and kissed her

 

 

And then he smiled

 

 

 

Then he turned and saw me

 

 

He looked at me and a tear ran down my cheek

 

 

I turned to run away

 

 

 

But I couldn't

 

 

My feet seemed to stick to the ground

 

 

And the room wouldn't stop spinning

 

 

 

And then when he started walking towards me

I realised right then and there

I cannot run away from my love

I can only let me love kill me.

 

And as we all know, love always prevails.

Reviews

[reca-becca]

Awsome poem Kitty! I really like this one! that happens to me alot too!!! hahahahaha! but I don't like nightmares1 they are scary! 8^O

[Somebody you've already..]

wow very vivid i really like it. i was searching your poems to see which one to review and i really liked this one the best. It may be a nightmare but it is also a really good poem. great write.

[Seriana]

Ouch. Nightmare indeed. That is the most sinking, awful feeling ever. It nearly makes you ill. The pain is very real in your words, like a knife digging in deep. Nice work.

[Rockebah]

It's a good poem. Very enjoyable. I expected more from the ending though. I feel like their should of been something more. It feels incomplete but other than that i give it credit.