Tormented Words

I dont have dreams anymore. Only nightmares, and this is one of them.

Tormented Words

 

Tormented Words

Ringing in my head

Rattling my every thought

 

I can not picture the sound

Of these words coming out of your mouth

They get caught in my head and I stop breathing

 

I try and try and try again to forget

These words that just won't leave me be

But they seem to enjoy my pain

 

And then

That day

 The day I didn't want to imagine

 

He walked by

He walked straight by me calmly and swiftly

And went up to her

 

 I could only imagine

What he was  about to say

And he said it

 

"I love you"

 

Not to me but to her

He took her in his arms and kissed her

And then he smiled

 

Then he turned and saw me

He looked at me and a tear ran down my cheek

I turned to run away

 

But I couldn't

My feet seemed to stick to the ground

And the room wouldn't stop spinning

 

And then when he started walking towards me

I woke up

Reviews

[reca-becca]

Awsome poem Kitty! I really like this one! that happens to me alot too!!! hahahahaha! but I don't like nightmares1 they are scary! 8^O

[Somebody you've already..]

wow very vivid i really like it. i was searching your poems to see which one to review and i really liked this one the best. It may be a nightmare but it is also a really good poem. great write.

[Seriana]

Ouch. Nightmare indeed. That is the most sinking, awful feeling ever. It nearly makes you ill. The pain is very real in your words, like a knife digging in deep. Nice work.

[Rockebah]

It's a good poem. Very enjoyable. I expected more from the ending though. I feel like their should of been something more. It feels incomplete but other than that i give it credit.