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Very short. Not too high quality, but I'm not fussed. I wanted to convey the simplicity of emotion.

Blue skies...
Your eyes...
Hypnotise...

 Blue things...
Inklings...
I love you.

Author's Note

I had planned to put it to a melody. I had planned to make it nice.

As it stands, it's not very good.

I tried other things, and none of them got across what I wanted them to.

I wanted to convey the utter simplicity of what I could feel, and longer poems and lyrics were just not working. They were too complex for something as simple as 'love'.
I hope to God I've done it justice.

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

...I needed this poem.
It is a gift that you wrote such words of beauty; in their brevity, they are perfect to how you feel for those eyes, that girl.
You needn't try anyhting but truth in your soul, whether it comes out harsh or kind in the poetry.
Poetry is art, but feelings are always real, no matter; not to fret as I can not of course take this poem personally,
but if a poem such as this had been written to me,
my same blue eyes like the sky would sparkle forever and evermore,
and they do.

This poem makes me want to say,
"I love you too."

(to my fiancee'...you've inspired me to write him a beautiful love poem tonight.)

[Callum Dalloway]

Oh I like!

Simple, yet flowing! Hehe, it just shows us what you're in love with. It is powerful! =]

Nice work! I must post all my sonnets and stuff.....

[Star Catcher]

I really like this. It does convey the simplicity. I especially like how everything rhymes but 'I love you'. It shows how out of the ordinary it is.

[Lloyd]

Actually, this is awesome, complete, awesome.