Wasted Time

Wasted Time

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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So this is another break up song! Hope you like it! The hidden message is: Once you've tasted a love that strong <3

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Wasted Time

Three weeks gone and passed,
That was when my world crashed,
How did I survive that long without you,
But I guess that I needed to,
I thought you were what I needed,
But you were just something that I craved,
You said we were just too far apart,
Too bad my age will never change

You said that this will never work,
I think it's time we broke up,
You said I was too young

I'm not gonna waste my time,
Not gonna waste my tears,
Waiting for you to come back,
After you disappeared,
Cuz unlike you,
I don't deserve that pain,
Cuz I tried and I cared,
But you left me there,
Crying by the door where you told me goodbye,
I won't let you hurt me another time

I miss those days,
When I would wear my ring facing in,
But that was before,
The walls were caving in,
And burning to the ground,
Before you left without a sound,
Before the ashes flew around,
And the candlelight burned out

You said that this will never work,
I think it's time we broke up,
You said I was too young

Baby I couldn't say anything,
You had me lost for words,
With that blank stare in my eyes,
I really should've said something,
Should've told you what was,
Running through my mind,
Now I'm playing that day,
Back in my head,
With that blank stare in my eyes,
And it makes me wanna cry

But I'm not gonna waste my time,
Not gonna waste my tears,
Waiting for you to come back,
After you disappeared,
Cuz unlike you,
I don't deserve that pain,
Cuz I tried and I cared,
But you left me there,
Crying by the door where you told me goodbye,
I won't let you hurt me another time

You said that this will never work,
I think it's time we broke up,
You said I was too young <3

© 2013 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
Okay so this setup is a lot different than what I usually do. I usually just have: Verse 1, Chorus, Verse 2, Chorus, Verse 3, Chorus, and possibly and Outro. But at the time I wrote this I wanted to try something different. I did kind of like: Verse 1, Pre-Chorus, Chorus, Verse 2, Pre-Chorus, Verse 3, Chorus, and then used my Pre-Chorus as and Outro. So other than the weird setup I hope you guys like it! :) Feel free to comment and review!

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I thought you were what I needed,
But you were just something that I craved,
You said we were just too far apart,
Too bad my age will never change

When I read this I was like oooh damn Krista you go girl preach it sista haha but seriously I was thinking BURN!!

And yeah other than that I like the different song set up. The song's amazing, by the way, yours always are :) I think that's pretty much it so... yeah haha

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

10 Years Ago

Aww thanks :) haha



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this work has no problem with substance. it is strung together with an almost verse like quality both reminiscent of song and that, for that reason alone, I can fully appreciate

great write

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

10 Years Ago

Thank you!!
You go girl! Wonderful song!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
I thought you were what I needed,
But you were just something that I craved,
You said we were just too far apart,
Too bad my age will never change

When I read this I was like oooh damn Krista you go girl preach it sista haha but seriously I was thinking BURN!!

And yeah other than that I like the different song set up. The song's amazing, by the way, yours always are :) I think that's pretty much it so... yeah haha

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

10 Years Ago

Aww thanks :) haha

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