Hollow Haiku

I'm barren within.

 

A childless, fruitless woman.

 

Restless in my skin.

Reviews

[Mistral Bilgera]

Very brief, but tells a lot: the emotions, sadness and frustration of a woman unable to conceive.
it has beauty in its sadness. I sympathize, and may God send you one child that'll complete you someday.

as for the poem, it's great. :) a very touching haiku.

good luck and Godspeed.
keep on expressing through poetry. :)

[Adela Muresan]

How many feelings you put together in three simple verses.

It is exceptionally beautiful � great work !!

A.M.

[The Mad Prophet]

Touching, and it was perfect to use I Haiku, for it has very few words. You expressed the hollowness inside, which makes my mind wonder off a bit. Similer to a fruit that bares fruit, or a pollentated flower. Very well done, reminds me of one of my poems, Self Replicate, Then Decimate.

[Autumn's Child]

So few words spoke volumes on emptiness. This touched my heart.

[The Autumn Faerie]

Very, very well said.
And very, very sad...

May your wishes come true, someday...