A Shadow...

A Shadow...

A Poem by Jan
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I love my shadow and sometimes pretend it's real. So, I'll talk to it and play around but, there's another side to it I never thought of... what if my shadow was actually a real spirit?

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I make a move, you follow me

I take a step, you move too

You copy whatever I do...

 

Why do you do this?

Are you trying to talk to me?

Are you trying to mock me?

 

You're always there!

Infront of me, behind me

Always copying me...

 

I see you everyday of my life

Just copying everything I do...

...The dark creature that follows me...

© 2013 Jan


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This is a great piece.
Recognizing the role of shadow is lovely idea.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jan

11 Years Ago

Lolz thanks ^-^
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome ^-^
A nice poem...An enjoyable read...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jan

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
I love it my love!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

Hahaha cause my dig had stepped on my phone
Jan

11 Years Ago

Hahaha "dig"?
Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

Dog! Stupid phone!
Awsome

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jan

11 Years Ago

Thanks love~

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Added on February 7, 2013
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Jan
Jan

Dream Land, Juniperlederp, CA



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