Dear Mother

This is my life,

But you're taking control,

Watching my every move,

Like you're working patrol.

Of course every parent,

Wants what is best,

But at some point or another,

You must take a rest. 

The decisions I make,

Are mine, and my own.

You must trust that there right,

From the way you have shown.

I will make mistakes,

And from them I'll learn.

But in order to learn,

First I must burn.

I love you mother,

But this is my decision,

I promise,

I'll make every choice with precision. 

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Strange how it comes down to this.
Your piece is full of genuine emotion,
frustration and unconditional love.

[A Girl in Love]

I can relate but my problem is my dad, my mom is carefree. but yes I know what your saying!

[Anicca]

I can relate, damn mothers, oh how we love them but oh how they do our heads in! Lovely piece!

[Tom]

You're the best ever hun