Look a little deeper

Look a little deeper

A Poem by LeDiisco
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Everyone needs to look a little deeper.

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Outter skin. 

Thats all you are. 

Its the only thing people see from afar. 


Personality means nothing.

Only a face. 

A body can easily be replaced.


I want you to see the inside of me.

Forget what you see.

Theres more that can be. 


More beauty lies underneath all skin.

To see you just need to know where to begin. 


I promise if you take a closer look,

Theres more then just a girl who can clean and cook.


She smiles, she laughs, creative too.

Patient and will actually listen to you.


Funny, daring and always caring. 

Sometimes can be overbearing. 


She just needs love and a little respect. 

Its the same thing in life that you expect. 


Notice the person that lies deep inside. 

The one that likes to run and hide.


If you take the time to learn and know.

Maybe the inner will start to show. 


Like I said, I promise theres more to me.

She only wants the chance to be free.

© 2011 LeDiisco


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I agree to all these you say.
It is true that people usually just take your outter side instead of the inner. But there is a huge thing that affect your outter side, which is the way you look at yourself. If you look at yourself with happy, positive thoughts, then your face changes, too. On the other hand, if you look at yourself in a negative way, then that will be the oppisite.
When I get to know someone, I look at their faces, not to judge if they are beautiful or not, but to see if their hearts are healthy. I would rather fall for a normal guy with a cute smile and a sweet heart than a vampire with a handsome face but sick body.
I know you understand what I mean. :-)
I hope this healps, too.
You can message me any time and we can talk and be friends! >_____O
Have a good day!

Sincerely,
Miya

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I agree to all these you say.
It is true that people usually just take your outter side instead of the inner. But there is a huge thing that affect your outter side, which is the way you look at yourself. If you look at yourself with happy, positive thoughts, then your face changes, too. On the other hand, if you look at yourself in a negative way, then that will be the oppisite.
When I get to know someone, I look at their faces, not to judge if they are beautiful or not, but to see if their hearts are healthy. I would rather fall for a normal guy with a cute smile and a sweet heart than a vampire with a handsome face but sick body.
I know you understand what I mean. :-)
I hope this healps, too.
You can message me any time and we can talk and be friends! >_____O
Have a good day!

Sincerely,
Miya

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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