We share it all

Really short.... I may expand, but I woke up from a nap and thought of this.... so I wrote it down before I forgot it.

Whenever I feel that we are far

I look at the sky and stair at each star.

We share the same sky and breath the same air.

The same moon The same sun, They always stay there

So whenever I feel far, or really so alone, 

I look into our sky into the deep unknown.

Reviews

[roy mccarthy]

nice poem!
stare......not stair!

[Zeek4]

Short, sweet and simple. I liked it.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The longing for love is touching.
I was deeply moved.

[Winslow Des Totes]

I can feel the despair in these words and I admit I have felt them too. :) Terrific write; very moving. :)