Moon

A Haiku....

The winter month comes
 I stare up at the pale moon
  Now I wait for you
 

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think, thankyou.

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

I felt this poem was missing a ending. Even though it was a Haiku, and is naturally
a short poem, it felt lost.

[Natalie]

Miss, I personally LOVE this. As said before

[Nicholas Hallows]

Great atmosphere created here with few words.
I'm not overly keen on haiku (although I have written a few myself when my brain has needed a bit of exercise) but I felt these words transcended genre.
Well done!
NH