My Daddy

My Daddy

A Poem by LacyBug
"

This is for my dad

"

I sit here and daydream of
my future and how it seems
I can picture my wedding day
my daddy walking me down the aisle
To meet my fate
I look over at him and see a single
Tear
he thinks he's losing his baby
His biggest fear
but I love him more than ever on this
Day
so I look at him and blow a kiss
His way

He has been there for every single
day of my life
He has been the provider through all
the struggle and strive
I would be lost if he hadn't shown me
the way
I don't know that I would have made it
from day to day
I am so very lucky for all he has
done
Out of all dads, he is the very best one

I love you DAD!

© 2008 LacyBug


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i thought it was great. you really described how u and ur father felt or is going to feel that way. Again it was awsome. Keep it up, keep writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cool I love to see positive messages/ poetry on family .. i like the flow also ..being a dad I love it cause yo uhonor him so much..kudos

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful tribute to your Dad, I really like this. Oh and thanks for your kind comments on (God and Me) they are appreciated as is your friendship.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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How touching it is to see you adore your father so. He must be very proud of you and love you dearly. I wish all father-daughter relationships could be so lovely. Thank you for sharing this, LacyBug. It makes me feel happy.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beaufitul tribute to your dad. I didn't have a dad like that in my life so consider yourself very blessed and let your dad know how very much he means to you. I guarantee it will make a father's heart sing! Thanks for sharing something so personal with the rest of us!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a beautiful tribute I think he would be very proud to read

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I cannot critique this because it is individual to you-but I will say that this is very heartfelt and the reader can sense that. Beautiful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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LacyBug
LacyBug

Axton, VA



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