Kate...

Kate...

A Poem by Laura
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This is Viola's description of Kate.

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Her blonde hair to show just how vain,
Her crimson tinted eyes reminded me of blood lust and pain. 
Walking like a lioness searching for her desperation, 
which was to be loved and adored and the resever of every mans inspiration.

My competition she did not like, 
While my brother she adored,
as the others would never fall at her feet unless she was laying dead on the floor. 

She used to be the prettiest,
fairest of them all,
now she's just normal and not liking it at all. 

Obnoxious she was, 
terribly so,
and would soon be the death of my life and soul. 

© 2013 Laura


Author's Note

Laura
sorry if there are any spelling mistakes. I'm dyslexic.

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And you're dyslexic? I don't believe it, that was incredible. Really wonderful and deep meaning to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Laura, I'm also dyslexic, but I overcame most of it. I read like crazy, even though its hard. I liked the poem very much. It's very well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can see the picture flowing. Very wonderous. :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


lovely write.... well written..... spec liked the last line....

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 1, 2010
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Laura
Laura

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I'm Laura and I joined when I was 13, I haven't really used this a lot over the past couple of years but am starting again. I am 17 now and I enjoy most genres when it comes to books, particularly fan.. more..

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