Tears

I let my Tears roll of my cheek and hit the floor,
Thinking of the one i adore,
he left me behind to fend for myself,
and now i cant seem to find my place agian

Author's Note

its alittle short ^^" tell me what you think plz

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

really sad write..
i can easily relate to it..
you did a good job:)

[Angel Veselinov]

sad simple and beautiful :) thanks for sharing

[Sweets]

Short and sad o.o
But nice =D

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. the first three lines are excellent, the fourth feels forced.

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[loowzerX]

this is very good.

[Marshall Hanson]

Short but to the point. Great job!

[Sports Girl]

good job

[KaySea]

very good

[Cherry Blossom]

you did a good job no poem is to short as long as it comes from the heart and this did