A Poem by ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

I let my Tears roll of my cheek and hit the floor,
Thinking of the one i adore,
he left me behind to fend for myself,
and now i cant seem to find my place agian

© 2010 ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

Author's Note

~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
its alittle short ^^" tell me what you think plz

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really sad write..
i can easily relate to it..
you did a good job:)

Posted 10 Years Ago

sad simple and beautiful :) thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago

Short and sad o.o
But nice =D

Posted 10 Years Ago

Good write. the first three lines are excellent, the fourth feels forced.

Posted 10 Years Ago

nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago

this is very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Short but to the point. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago

good job

Posted 10 Years Ago

very good

Posted 10 Years Ago

you did a good job no poem is to short as long as it comes from the heart and this did

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on August 28, 2010
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~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

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