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Life's Disadvenatges

Life's Disadvenatges

A Story by Lauren Alaska

Is this a disorder or is it just life...

Can you understand?
You told me you can.
Have you experienced this?
You told me you have.
Will do anything to help me?
You told me you would.
Have you?

I'm living with this disorder,
this disease,
this disadvantage,
It's more then that,
Creates insecurities,

Now is this the disorder talking,
or is this just life.

© 2011 Lauren Alaska

Author's Note

Lauren Alaska
This poem was inspired to me by the many things wrong with me.
Mostly inspired by this disorder I have, people say it's no big deal, but it affects my life tremendously.

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I love this,
Nice flow and words.
Speaks out loud! :)

"Now is this the disorder talking,
or is this just life."

Love that line!!

Posted 11 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I thought it was clear, and well thought out to the point.. This disorder is a big part of your life, by the sounds of it.. It seems by the way you speak of this disorder and your life have never met as one and they are not related. It could be that the two of you have not been introduced on a level where you can work deeply together to produce something of a fruitful flavor.. Maybe maybe not..

Posted 11 Years Ago

There is such a pleading here... a longing to be understood... moved into the acceptance of all you have to face.. every hour, every day. You speak this forth so profoundly. May you find the peace in the midst of the storm.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Yeah my writing is inspired by my stuff too mainly my uni-polar depression not bi uni. and the mild schizophrenia, not my schixophrenia! other people yeah you get the inspiration from soul release or abyss.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on October 1, 2011
Last Updated on October 3, 2011
Tags: life, help, disorder, phobia, insecurites


Lauren Alaska
Lauren Alaska

Anchorage, AK

I'm Lauren. There's so many things nobody knows about me, I can honestly say that there's not one person standing on this planet who knows everything about me. I use this to help me write, I expose.. more..


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