The Greatest Love Poem Ever Written

Something that just popped into my head. About a two minute write. Thought I'd share.

The Greatest Love Poem Ever Written

 

 

The greatest love poem ever written

Can not be found scribed on parchment

Nor typed within pixels on a screen.

The greatest love poem ever written

Can not be bound within a book

Nor etched in monuments to be seen.

The greatest love poem ever written

Can not abide the captivity of words

But with lovers, it survives shared between.

 

Legion

26July08

Reviews

[Rainbowco]

The greatest love poem ever written
Can not be found scribed on parchment
Nor typed within pixels on a screen.
Can not be bound within a book
Nor etched in monuments to be seen.
Can not abide the captivity of words
But with lovers, it survives shared between.

Each line well written, nicely done.

[Orlando Murcia]

True very true
Graet job bud this was
a known fact

Actions speak louder than words

Great point, Great poem!!

Orlando M

[darkgurl]

So very true, and well put, like this...Kim

[April Child]

Too true but it is fun trying :)

[Black Rose Seraphim]

This is incredible. Simplistic, to the point, and oh so true. Your work is great.

[Darmochwal]

"on" monuments? and it's true that you can't write a "love" poem, but the definition of love is different for everyone, and ending with the word between bothers me a little. the phrasing is strange, and strange phrasing is not something negative, but . . .

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Absolutely spot on! For the longest time, I would not even attempt writing love poems because none can match the real emotion of love itself. Excellent work! :-) Sharon

[Lewis Findley]

This is good and very true legion. AND Thank you fo rthe recent review, Your Freind
"Lady Godiva Wentworth"

[Lia]

This is a great piece! So true and well written. Well done xxxx

[Strawberry Crush]

Words are but shadows compaired to the real makings of love.

[Poeticme]

WOW!!!..that is so true.love the way you put it together,I too have them 2 minute wonders..thanks for sharing this,and TY for reading my works..TC and have a safe week:-)